I have to admit that the "Let's go ahead and..." is particularly annoying.  Kudo's for keeping the "uhm, uhh, err" quotient down but really, can you perhaps sub in a few "at this point I'm going to...", "this area here details..." or even a "when you click here..." would be good.  Mix it up a little.  If God didn't want us to use all the words he wouldn't have given us such a big dictionary.