1. Not sure, where in this DEMO you mentioned about Entity Framework, I have no-idea what you were trying to Demo
2. When you do a Demo like this, it would be great if you cna do a White Board with a small diagram about what you are going to Demo (Bth, this is something your team can suggest to all presenters). Picture speaks 1000 words

3. Saaid Kahn - I personally believe you could have slowed down a little with your Demo Speech, I could barely catch some of the words what you said (sorry, no offense we all are learning

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4. My 2 cents - Write down in a small piece of paper (or 3x4 Index cards) in what exactly you are going to Demo & go step-by-step, that will make things easy to understand.